Our First Story - Grand Finale!

Monday, 25 April 2011


Rohit wondered why Amar is calling him. "Hi Amar".


"Rohit, I want to talk to you about Neha. What happened between you both? She came off to my house and told me that she will stay here permanently and asked me not to tell this to anyone. Do you think since she is an orpahn no one can question you and you can play with her life. I am not her own brother yet i show an interest in her life and career. She trusted you a lot Rohit. I never thought you would have left her and that too with your baby inside her."

Rohit was stunned, "What you mean Amar, I met her a week back and we had a small fight. She said i have taken advantage of her and walked away. After that she was not reachable. Amar, I want to talk to her. I love her so much. Can you give me her number".

Amar promised to give him a call again once Neha comes back. Rohit wanted to share his feelings with someone.

Rithu's door bell rang.

Two years later.

Rohit was neatly dressed in her wedding costume. Nithu was inviting everyone for the wedding in the reception. "I knew that the wedding will happen", Nithu thought. Soniya interrupted her, "Hey! Day dreamer, One more love story to begin. now i have decided not to get involved in any kind of triangular love stories, if you have one such story i am story buddy i will never help you!" They both laughed.

Amar entered the marriage hall. Nithu smiled, "Amar, if you had not called Rohit things might have ended differently". She saw Rithu on the other side. She was happily playing with the baby.

Two years back.

"Rithu i need to talk to you". Rithu greeted him inside. Rohit explained everything to her. He also told her that Neha is now pregnant and staying with Amar at California. "We will talk to Neha and bring her here". Rithu promised him.

Meanwhile, Neha came to know from that Amar spoke to Rohit. She left Amar's place that night without informing him. She just left a paper for him. It was written "There is nothing wrong with Rohit. I am leaving him for someone else. Please don't search for me"

She left California. No one knew where she was going.

Rithu got a call from her office and they asked her to leave for long term onsite to California. She was supposed to travel the next day since her Visa interviews got over and she cleared everything. This was her career goal but helping Rohit at this time was equally an important task for her.

She called Amar immediately, she knew it will be midnight at California yet she wanted to reach him and talk to Neha. "Who is this? Oh Rithu, ya Neha told me lots about you. Fine wait i will see if she is still awake. No way.. No Rithu, she has left me a message and she left the apartment". Rithu could not hold the tears. She wanted to bring back peace and joy to Rohit's life. After speaking to him she understood how much he loved her and wanted to marry her. "Amar, please help me in finding her. We need to bring back the lost love between Rohit and Neha."

Now.

Amar laughed at Nithu's statement "Yes Nithu, you are right if i had not spoken to Rohit, he might have ended up in marrying my Rithu and i never would have got a chance to team up with her in California in search of Neha. It took two years for us to find her. In future Kiran will tell his friends that he saw his parents wedding. We are all not gifted for this situation to happen." They were not able to control the laughter once Amar finished the line.

"Why are you guys laughing. Kiran started crying, can you both go bring Neha to the mandapam. See Rohit is being restless there.", Rithu shouted at all three of them.

Nithu took Kiran in her hands and followed Soniya to the Bride's room.

"Rithu, at this occasion i wanted to tell you this. You look amazing and i love you so much". "Me too Amar. I should thank Neha for leaving to California", she blinked at him.

The wedding went well and finally Nithu never suffered those "so called" dreams again.

They all lived happily ever after..!!!!








5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hurray !!! Atlast rithu nithu ku shamadhi katitom..evealo twist evalo turns !!!kadaisila hero amar than pavam,avan job kooda resign panitu,neha baby ku oru father kedaika poradinan!!!rohit neha va serthu vechan !! adhuku parisa avanuku kedaichadhu - rohitoda old lover rithu....story fulla mathavanga love pathi kanavu kandu, ella matterum ottu ketta Nithu pavam..avaluku mattum enum yarume kedaikala... sonia dance paathu kootam koranju pona night club owner vera vazhi illama sonia vaye kalaiyanam panitaru.....

due to request of no one, Soon We will start PART - 2

Unknown said...

Abvsolutely Vasanth.. Ultimate!! In part 2 Kiran will be starring. And we will make others guess if its a boy or girl!

Crankyboy said...

part 2 story starts like this. Rohit gets vanished the next day after the marriage. Reason being the servant lady had a affair with him. her name is pooja and she is the sister of Sonia. Nithu becomes mad after series of dreams ( mid night and mid afternoon) and rithu is killed by her. her cousin Ismail comes to India after the US trip and tries to kill rohit because Neha was her ex gril friend. because of the ove failure Ismail who is orginally called pradeep, changes his name to Ismail and joins in Osama bin laden team.

Obama now comes to India in search of amar who has taken large amount of loan in US banks before resigning the job and espcapes to India.

to the suprise, Kiran is not a baby and is a Robot crated by NASA to find amar....

Now anybody can continue.

Unknown said...

Epppaa.. Ungalukku mattum dhan epppadi yooosika mudiyum!

Anonymous said...

An interesting concept and nicely executed! I enjoyed the way each one of you took the story after the other person finished! It was interesting to read different authors style and each of you have done it nicely. Had fun reading ..

-Kavitha.

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